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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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 the whisper men line the evening eves there are velvet voices in unison hovering as the clouds before storms and then the thunder brings her gifts as copper coins for their eyes and the dancers of death collect their wages tomorrow will bring back her only sun with his new tattoos of another dawning day she will be a proud mother in black leather and her curves will be the nomads' liquor _____________ daark (highway series) for the fix way red and white crew |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and then the thunder brings her gifts as copper coins for their eyes and the dancers of death collect their wages The entire poem is superb... but these lines... absolutely stunning!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suthern. Humble thanks lady friend. |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Fantastic. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Cool as hell. I like. H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kindered..thanks so much _____________ ms UBP, thanks lady friend for the eyes here |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Brings shivers. Intense and poignant. Appreciated also the picture, the atmosphere is there. Love, Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I hear the thunder, leaving velvet only a ghost of moments in the night for the sharper insignias of tomorrow's tatooed flight. How is it that addictions all seem to lead to copper coins? ...sigh. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks so much lady friend.. ______________' ms kl..it the old days it was gold coins for the ferryman journey..I guess nowadays the ferryman would get mugged for the coins..thanks babe |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
she will be a proud mother in black leather _________ love this and love seeing your artistic side, D  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes..thanks ms S..I do appreciate your riding along |
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