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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
You have the power to see again see again to move through the world again unfurl again through the swirl again unfurl the world again golden blue listen listen " " cosmic rainbows glisten move move through the harvest the wheat consume confound and " " (fill in the blank poetry) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... and dance to the sound! Well, that came to me, because I just read "Dance", but I think it fits well. You move well to the call of your creativity. Love, M  |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
OH, I LIKE THAT! :-) |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Your use of words is magical!!! |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
thanks, GBride, here's my version... You have the power to see again see again to move through the world again unfurl again through the swirl again unfurl the world again golden blue listen listen "incoming transmission" cosmic rainbows glisten move move through the harvest the wheat consume confound and "reap" |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
and thanks the sun great write, enjoyed the words and the blank ending. regards yann |
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