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Until Your Touch
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Until Your Touch |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Until your touch I had lost all belief The smile I strived to share Just concealed grief With no light source Respite from endless night Was just a cherished dream Beyond my plight All cries for help Fell on ears of the deaf Tomorrow’s meaningless When no hope’s left But miracles Are more than fairy tales Such changes can occur When love prevails I can’t explain The wondrous sensation Your strong arms provided My salvation If you question Why I need you so much I never really lived Until your touch |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
When it comes, your appetite is insatiable, this I have know too Ruth. Beautifully done. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Suthern, lovely words here my friend and the meaning it holds speaks chapters to my heart, nothing like having meanig to your life and someone to share with. Rick |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Suthern, I so hope this is about a recent conquest!! I know there is always someone there to love. Hopefully you have found the right person.. love, jo |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
nice declaration and enjoyable words, precious feelings can't be replaced. thanks for the poem yann |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Mysteria, Rick, Jo & Yann: Thank you all... I appreciate your kind comments so very much! *S* |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
But miracles Are more than fairy tales Such changes can occur When love prevails _______ very nice  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nothing like love opens us to the miracles of life and makes us fit for life. Live, live, dear Ruth, beautiful Poetess. You expressed your heart's emotions so captivatingly here. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, they say the touch is almost a metal feeling the first time..something jagged that leaves little pricking holes of want more..enjoyed your work here |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggies) Oh Suthern, this made me tear up reading because I believe this resonates as a personal anthem to many as it does to you, and I can certainly relate to this wholeheartedly..........as I went so long distant from social life, yet silently suffered for so long, because all I really wanted was to be touched........spiritually, physically and compassionately.........and I too never feel like I really lived until this year, and that is why I feel reborn and there's this unimpeachable bliss I've never felt before in my heart through all the social connections and risks I've made and taken! (huggies) I'm sooooooooooo happy that you, too, have been touched and live with sensation and wonder, my friend, bless you wholeheartedly!  XOXO, Lisping Hibiscus "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
suthern - a touch from the right person can be very enchanting, as you write of... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Wow I wish some babe would say that to me!!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Some poems fall into our hands when we need to read them the most. Thank you. Alison |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you all so very much! *S* And Alison... you just made my day. *S* Many, many thanks! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What a glorious feeling, I love how you express yourself, impossible not to feel the love. Just Beautiful, you~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you so much, Blues... *S* You've certainly started my day with a smile! *S* |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ohhh, what a beautiful feeling you have captured here Ruth. It is true. Sometimes it takes the touch of another to wake us up to begin to live again. Loved this. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Kit: Thank you so much, sweet lady... seeing your name always gives me smiles! *S* |
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