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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I could look back now at that window in my watching and see you with that girl grin on your woman lips sitting the brown bottle down on the bar and taking your laughter for a walk outside and I took a drink after you just to say I did and to know if your lipstick tasted like a kiss or something even more provocative perhaps as you looked back with that trapped you in a glance then said I didn't know where that had been before but you would show me everything I could imagine if I didn’t mind getting a little dirty on occasion and staying there even after you didn't want any more and of course you knew I wasn't a man to just say maybe ______________ daark (do of water) |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well if she didn't know, we sure do  Good one Dark. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
approaching wildness, it is the open heart that leaves maybe behind. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mysteria, thank you so much for looking in. ___________ ms indi, I can only imagine you ordering a long neck..and then looking that way as you tip it to your lips...thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and I took a drink after you just to say I did LOL... Been there, done that... and it's poor substitution for lips! *S* Loved this! *S* |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
and of course you knew I wasn't a man to just say maybe ____________ no..I bet you aren't  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Laughter and certainties make for an irresistible love time. Your psychological depth fascinates me. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thanks for licking the bottle babe!! ______________ ms browneyes, I did say perhaps once...but it sounded funny, like double parking almost., thanks lady _________________ ms mar, thank you lady friend for your eyes and smiles |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Of course. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you little one |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, but a maybe lends to so much promise. Wonderful reading you again. [But only because I've been lacking in attendance. ] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...sure miss your eyes here babe..but I do love when they return for moments. thanks |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"and taking your laughter for a walk outside" My, something about that line, just strikes me. It's a great visual. You have a wonderful flow to your words, Dark. I always enjoy how your mind travels and the suggestions you develop for the reader. Much enjoyed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
you didn't let me down, just made me want more. Your words push buttons. Another great ride. I imagined a Sportster, hopping from one longneck to another. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Friend Kit...thanks so much for the read and comment. __________________' ms LG' thank you for the eyes again..I am a bit too tall for sporties...but a good streetglide will drag my hips most places they hide a long neck or two. |
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