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Leaving Me Behind |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Leaving Behind Leaving behind Your love My home Leavng me behind Broken heart Looking ahead Driving through the storm Finding my answers To your heart To your questions Leaving behind of all love An your heart What else is left to say Where love hides Like a sunsets Slowly to a river Finding answers To my questions Leaving behind of all All of this Saying goodbye to you My love By vandana |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
After the sunsets, the sun will rise once more! Enjoyed you poem and God bless, -Bob |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Like a sunsets Slowly to a river Finding answers ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Pretty pretty thoughts~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful words. have a nice day yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Vandana, you express the pain of your broken heart very intensely. May you find the answers you are looking for and trust in the best outcome. Love, Margherita |
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Poetry101web New Member
since 2009-10-07
Posts 3 |
Right there with ya, love is a confusing game sometimes. Enjoyed the honesty of your work. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Looking ahead Driving through the storm Finding my answers To your heart To your questions Leaving behind of all love You write the heart-wrench very well! *S* |
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