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vandana
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0 posted 2009-10-06 07:11 PM




Leaving Behind
Leaving behind
Your love
My home
Leavng me behind
Broken heart
Looking ahead
Driving through the storm
Finding my answers
To your heart
To your questions
Leaving behind
of all love
An your heart
What else is left to say
Where love hides
Like a sunsets
Slowly to a river
Finding answers
To my questions
Leaving behind of all
All of this
Saying goodbye to you
My love
By vandana






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Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2009-10-06 07:27 PM


After the sunsets, the sun will rise once more!

Enjoyed you poem and God bless,

-Bob



BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2009-10-06 08:56 PM


Like a sunsets
Slowly to a river
Finding answers

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Pretty pretty thoughts~



2islander2
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3 posted 2009-10-07 03:44 AM


beautiful words.

have a nice day

yann

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-10-07 05:11 AM


Dear Vandana, you express the pain of your broken heart very intensely.

May you find the answers you are looking for and trust in the best outcome.

Love,
Margherita

Poetry101web
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5 posted 2009-10-07 11:41 AM


Right there with ya, love is a confusing game sometimes.  Enjoyed the honesty of your work.
suthern
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6 posted 2009-10-07 03:45 PM


Looking ahead
Driving through the storm
Finding my answers
To your heart
To your questions
Leaving behind
of all love

You write the heart-wrench very well! *S*

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