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Open Poetry #45

Treat Her

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

0 posted 2009-10-06 03:05 PM

Treat her right.
She will be so nice.
Treat her wrong.
She will be cold as ice.

Treat her like a queen.
She will be your lifelong dream.
Treat her bad.
You will end up lonely and sad.

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

1 posted 2009-10-06 03:51 PM

Ah! How true!!
True wisdom... How I wish evryone knew!
nice write...

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-10-06 05:13 PM

Yo Lamar,

This poem works very well.

Welcome to the site.

Bobby

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-10-10 01:58 AM

Hey Lamar,

I like how you think.

Alison

hafrock
Junior Member

since 2009-10-10

Posts 34
India

4 posted 2009-10-13 05:41 PM

A truth everyone knows but still dont know..nice

GBride
Senior Member

since 2009-07-02

Posts 538

5 posted 2009-10-15 07:31 PM

if you treat her like a dork,
she will bounce you like a cork.
Love your poem!!!

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