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Deluge |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England 
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driving sheets of rain cold,dank,dreary,day brooding clouds gather overhead ominous threat,now subsiding. infant sunbeams,transient light illuminate dark leafy lanes blackbirds song loudly proclaims welcome respite,life renewed |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
A beautiful description of a rainy day. Seeing beauty in ordinary things is rare gift> |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Can't wait for a rainy day like this. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the end of the storm... how very beautiful! *S* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Too much rain does require respite indeed! Beautifully expressed. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lovely visuals, you really painted the rain quite beautifully. Enjoyed, very much so! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoying this dark, healing moment of rain.  Welcome to PipARCTIC WIND |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
for some reason I love any poem with blackbirds in it  this was nice |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I can smell the fresh air that comes after a deluge. Alison |
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