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Open Poetry #45

Dance

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

0 posted 2009-10-05 04:29 PM

T   N   o   W
  A   G      A
              L
               T
                Z
B A L
      L            B R E A K
       R    S   A  E
       O     A S   L            D    A  N N Ccc EEE
    M O       L    L            D D A A NNN C   EE
                   Y            D   A A N N Ccc EEE

Something I don't get,
someone can make beautiful.

Something I can't do,
someone can do amazingly.

Dance is one of those things.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-10-06 11:25 AM

You can learn to dance on the floor, exactly as you dance on the page.

This is very beautiful. Sometimes there is joy in watching others dance too.

Dancing is said to enhance longevity.

Love,
Margherita

GBride
Senior Member

since 2009-07-02

Posts 538

2 posted 2009-10-06 10:00 PM

Oh,yeh, you can too dance. It just takes practice and you to relax.
But don't take a dance class: money wasted!
Just get out on the dance floor and try what everyone else is doing!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2009-10-07 03:25 PM

What a great way to present your poem. It brings more life to the poem, as the words seem to be moving, dancing like on the page.

ARCTIC WIND

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

4 posted 2009-10-14 07:29 PM

Thanks all! It's my first time doing a poem like this (you know with the visual).

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