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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-10-05 02:00 PM

She is a long, cool drink of vintage wine
Poised before my lips
And held there until the end of time
Savored with little sips
Not drained in one fleeting, clumsy swallow
Bypassing the sensitive tongue
Slowing the flow brings such pleasure to follow
Lessons not learned by the young
With age comes a deepening form of understanding
Of how to sustain that flow,
To savor forever the taste of her I am demanding
And in doing so,
The moment that would otherwise be spent fleeting
Is frozen somehow in time
A choice I chose willingly upon our first meeting
To tend her green growing vine

She will thus ripen, upon lips of mine
She, that way will be, like vintage wine

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-10-05 02:10 PM

What an exquisite association of her with wine! Your appreciation is expressed with the touch of elegance we have come to expect from you.

Very beautiful, also in the concluding lines.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2009-10-05 03:38 PM

Delectably dreamy! I have often thought of my own kisses as being akin to sips of a fine Bordeaux that get better with the passing of time ~ and experience.

Linda

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-10-05 05:16 PM

With age comes a deepening form of understanding
Of how to sustain that flow,
To savor forever the taste of her I am demanding

Choosing favorite lines from such a wonderful whole is all but impossible... but these linger so delightfully. *S* Beautiful work!!

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

4 posted 2009-10-05 05:37 PM

what lovely sentiment
"She is a long, cool drink of vintage wine
Poised before my lips
And held there until the end of time"

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2009-10-05 10:49 PM

Beautiful!
be back online in a few days...
am on the Oregon coast now

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

6 posted 2009-10-08 12:07 PM

you know I love your 'she' poems

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2009-10-14 01:49 PM

Savored with little sips
Not drained in one fleeting, clumsy swallow
Bypassing the sensitive tongue
Slowing the flow brings such pleasure to follow
Lessons not learned by the young
With age comes a deepening form of understanding
Of how to sustain that flow,
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES

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