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Morning Mist
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Morning Mist |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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It’s early and it’s cold to skin This morning waking from the night The view outside is one of awe I wonder still if dream I sight Heavenly the haze I see A halo light near pushing through The ground around still sleeping be A gift, a blessing that I view I see a glint of daylight smile It peaks above the mist below And as I watch more for a while A magic lingers in its glow I like to stay and watch it move To see its changes with the day The way it crowds and curls about To hypnotise, then fade away Nature; what a wonder she To share her beauty and her view To let us find when not expect A morning smile and something new I wander to a hill and climb To gaze upon this sea of white Protruding are the taller trees And mountain tops that claim the right It is a view that takes the breathe And makes one think of beauties awe In memories room to take a place With all the gifts I’ve seen before |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Rick, your awareness of Nature's beauty and the precious gifts every day holds, is wonderfully expressed here. Enjoyed this very much. Love, Margherita |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Margherita, wonderful to see you here my friend, thank you so much for your visit and comment once again to my work, very much appreciated. Rick |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I see a glint of daylight smile It peaks above the mist below And as I watch more for a while A magic lingers in its glow I like to stay and watch it move To see its changes with the day The way it crowds and curls about To hypnotise, then fade away So very beautiful... and as soft as the mist itself. *S* |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Suthern, so nice to see you here my friend, thank you so much for reading my poem and sharing your comment with me, enjoyed. Rick |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rick - missed this one. Nature here in British Columbia is in all it's beauty. What a beautiful place... BC |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Bill, thanks for the visit my friend, nature is wonderful with so many views to show us, nice we can enjoy. Rick |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
what a beautiful poem Rick! I love this! Bisous de Sydney RDB  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi James, thanks for the visit my friend and comment. Dear Roniece, nice you are back in Australia after your trip, good to see you here visiting and commenting, thank you my friend. Rick |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
We had a morning mist much like that this a.m. and I was happy to watch blue sky come as the sun burned off the gray. You are right, though, it's magical, as it hugs the earth and softens all the shapes, drapes and shapeshifts around the mountains. Fall means jackets and sweatshirts for most of us as the weather cools, but for the mountains in the morning, it's those angel hair shrouds! I enjoyed this very much. Karen |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Karen, lovely to get your reply my friend, nature is so wonderous that it often takes our breath away, how lucky we are to be here to see if but only a part of it. Thanks for your reply, always good to see you here. Rick |
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