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Our Minds Entwined
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Our Minds Entwined |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Far from the physical Space where our shells perform Puppets on mental strings These most glorious things Find a way to keep the bodies warm Ever the constant illusion Of reality out of reach Cold comfort though Cold winds blow Our minds yet, never breached Suffer these, the hallowed Times in which we dwell Far beyond physical More than mystical Than these earthen, dusty shells No magic words be spoken Nor given an outward sign We become As one When our minds become entwined |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah CG this is beautiful!  Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you RDB. I am thoroughly enjoying your Parisian poetry. My ancestors are from there, and Rouen. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've read this through several times and copied different lines every time (and assure you that's due to your wonderful phrasing, not my indecisiveness LOL). I'll stop confusing my cursor and tuck this beautiful work into my library to read still again. *S* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
vous êtes ma véritable âme soeur! Tu es ma vraie âme sœur. ~m |
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