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MeareY
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since 2009-09-30
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0 posted 2009-09-30 05:58 PM



The wonderful and beautiful world

This wonderful and beautiful world,
It is not created to be known by all.
The love songs are not sang with words, it is shown by all and power by you.

This wonderful and beautiful world,
It is not created to be familiar.
The words of prayers are not preached by a priest, it is mad by us.

This wonderful and beautiful world,
It is not carried by love.
The emotions are the everyday movements, the very emotions that build this world.

This wonderful and beautiful world,
It is not carried by songs.
These songs are the spoken language, the very words that kept it moving.

This wonderful and beautiful world,
It is in front of us, have you realized it yet?
Can you see it?
We do not long for happiness; we are blinded by the carelessness in front of our eyes.
This is a wonderful and beautiful world made by “all familiar love songs”,
Have you seemed it?
The wonderful songs of your annoying sibling, the wise words of our parents, the god awful smell of our apartments and the best friend though our years.
They are the power source of your wonderful and beautiful world.
Do you realize it?
Do you see “all familiar love songs” in this poem?
Let us come to our sense and known we live in a wonderful and beautiful world.
Open your eyes.


Made by Kevin, AKA Meare (anything)
August 31, 2009


Hi my name is kevin as you see, this is my one and only happy poem i made, it only happen once in a life time, however i a novice, will like to share with you all my one and only. Keep in mine i am newbie to this community. i have tired my best to read the rules however if i have did something wrong please contact me.

Enjoy EVERYONE!!

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1 posted 2009-10-01 09:00 AM


The title intrigued me and still does... even though I think it might be a spelling error since you mention being a novice? *S*

Either way... Welcome to Passions! I hope you enjoy it here! *S*

MeareY
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since 2009-09-30
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2 posted 2009-10-01 12:55 PM


Novoice, hum i thought i means newbie. Oh well, but anyways it's not the title. the first sentence of it is. Oh well, i guess i am not fit to write poem yet. Still i enjoy reading all of them here. Haha
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