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Open Poetry #45
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0 posted 2009-09-29 10:49 PM


Starting over seems
Beginning a new
Releasing dreams
Never came true

Dark of past
Sorrows wake
Tears alas
Time dissipates

Coming strength
Dark recedes
Sorrows length
Stubborn concedes

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1 posted 2009-09-29 10:51 PM

wonderful rhyme scheme! I love these kinds! Well done and the theme is something that hits home for me. This is a keeper!
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