Open Poetry #45 |
sensual was up.. |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
one of those before you come over afternoons wearing my holy jeans and flip-flops of course without socks on drinking jack and holding a chromed 16 watching gran torino in slow mo again wish old clint would have done the nam we might still have won something other then those chicken foot medals and there wasn't even any oil there guess it must have been democracy after all I hear your brakes squeak and then your door the aarp meeting must be over and you have lipstick on over your smile when you bring KFYucket in a bucket and something special from the stogie store a sun dress without pantyhose pretension a glock cocked on the coffee table next to your target patterns from the range and you are braless down to that tattoo just enough of the sexy on to make me sin an hour or so after our after dinner cohiba ______________ daark (saturday evening ghost..) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-19-2009 09:19 AM).] |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
wish old clint would have done the nam we might still have won something ~ love this... and you are braless down to that tattoo just enough of the sexy on to make me sin ~and this! : ) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks brown eyes... |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
You sound somewhat melancholy but I do like the line about the just enough of the sexy on to make you sin. I really enjoy your poetry! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Love your ponderings while watching Gran Torino! So you have a Saturday evening ghost? Mine visits in the early morning! Saturday has its own rhythm, lazy just enough, but also spare time for love. This was wonderful, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pretty 1..sure feels nice when you step in..thanks babe ______________ ms mar..more of a parallel partner view..but I did enjoy the show and have many of the same views..thanks lady |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is smokin'! Sensual wraps around every line. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe |
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