Open Poetry #45 |
Love Sweet Love |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love Sweet Love In a cozy apartment in a small town in Germany a young man and a woman just coming of age explore their possibilities. She curious of his masculinity and he fascinated with her femininity. On the record player a song is playing, "What the world needs now is love sweet love, thats the only thing that there's just to little of." They find themselves agreeing with the words of the song and in the softness of those moments they discuss the differences between love and sex; one a way to live a life and the other the thrill of a passionate moment. Wanting to know love, they fall asleep in each others arms feeling like they are planting a precious seed of love sweet love. JamesLee 28September 2009 Pirmasans, Germany |
||
© Copyright 2009 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved | |||
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very enjoyable poem, dear James. You share lovely memories. It's always good to stop and think in a relationship I find! Ohne Liebe ist das Leben traurig! Love, Margherita |
||
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just wonderful James! Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
Wanting to know love, they fall asleep in each others arms feeling like they are planting a precious seed of love sweet love. ________ your writings are always sweet |
||
marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
I could envision all of these words into a picture of the moment and the hope that followed... |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |