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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-09-28 07:09 PM


Love Sweet Love

In a cozy apartment
in a small town in Germany
a young man and a woman
just coming of age
explore their possibilities.
She curious of his masculinity
and he fascinated with her femininity.
On the record player
a song is playing,
"What the world needs now
is love sweet love,
thats the only thing that
there's just to little of."
They find themselves agreeing
with the words of the song
and in the softness of those moments
they discuss the differences
between love and sex;
one a way to live a life
and the other the thrill
of a passionate moment.
Wanting to know love,
they fall asleep in each others arms
feeling like they are
planting a precious seed
of love sweet love.

JamesLee
28September
2009

Pirmasans, Germany






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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-29 05:12 AM


A very enjoyable poem, dear James. You share lovely memories. It's always good to stop and think in a relationship I find!

Ohne Liebe ist das Leben traurig!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2009-09-29 07:01 AM


just wonderful James!  

Bisous de Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
3 posted 2009-09-29 07:08 PM



Wanting to know love,
they fall asleep in each others arms
feeling like they are
planting a precious seed
of love sweet love.
________

your writings are always sweet

            


marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
4 posted 2009-10-02 02:08 PM


I could envision all of these words into a picture of the moment and the hope that followed...
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