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Lone_Wolf84
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0 posted 2009-09-28 01:40 PM



Reaching lifeĀ“s peak I stand amassed.
Solved everything in life to statisfy myself.
Yet I am not statisfied.
Something I belive is the missing piece in the jigzaw of what is my life.
Some say I miss God in my equation.
But I think It's just love.
From someone that has never loved me before.

I say my soul but I think a woman.
It might be becouse I think soul mate.
One that has another story to add to mine.

And then I get afraid.
I'm putting love in a pedestal.
And the Love I draw in my mind.
Is so powerful I would seaze to be me for it.
Erease myself to fit into the woman that shares the same dream.

Just becouse. At this point I am lonely.
But not. I have my family and I love them.

But I need someone to put me first in her list.
Becouse my aim is to put someone first in mine.

I've cried for love. But I have never begged.
I've shout out for love but I have never cried.
I've made a fool of myself for love but I have never shouted.

I have retracted statments for love but I have never lied.
I've said I love you and I have retracted it

And I've said I love and never retracted it.

I have stealed for love but I have never bought love.
I have never died for love but I've wished it.

And I have lied for love but I have never stolen love.

...What if God is the love I am missing in the end.
That would sadden me. Becouse I rather make the woman I love to a goddess than choose someone that only comes in deep grief.


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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2009-09-28 04:41 PM


make the woman I love to a goddess .....

wow....what woman wouldn't want to be treated, loved, admired as a goddess...

Why   not have both ? Woman and God? completeness?

~ARH

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