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Open Poetry #45

Wild Oranges

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-09-24 07:16 PM

Wild Oranges

Yes it was true,
that upon first bite
the orange was bitter
but upon a second bite
a blissful taste
will permeate the mouth
and cause your lips
to give in to
a quiver.

From that day forth
I always wanted to
look into her eyes,
share of her sweet kiss,
enjoy her lovely smile,
taste her succulent lips.

JamesLee
22September
2009

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-09-25 01:57 AM

I have never seen wild oranges, but I could taste them tonight.

Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-09-25 05:03 AM

Thank you for the smiles, dear James.
It's all about stilling one's thirst, isn't it?

Love,
M

GBride
Senior Member

since 2009-07-02

Posts 538

3 posted 2009-09-25 10:07 PM

Absolutly delightful!!!

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

4 posted 2009-09-28 12:27 PM

refreshing

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2009-09-28 01:28 AM

It sounds like you like to taste forbidden fruit my friend. enjoyed the post.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2009-09-28 06:56 PM

Thank you Alison, Margherita, GBride, brneye and Lindsay for the wonderful responses...Lindsay I wrote this after watching an old silent film on tv the other day called "Wild Oranges"...James

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