Open Poetry #45 |
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A bench in Le Jardins des Plantes... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia ![]() |
I was sitting on my usual bench In Le Jardins des Plantes Had it all to myself Spread out like Legs up Begging the Sun Gods to find me When this woman French as French can be Approached me Obviously this was her bench And there was no way She was going to let me Have it all to myself She simply said ‘Excusez-moi Madame’ With such a force That I sat upright in an Instant and moved All the way over Cursing myself That I had given her The sunny spot And so we remained Sitting upright and steadfast Neither of us moving Until the Sun Gods Left us to pursue their Night time partners... Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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larzana Member
since 2009-09-17
Posts 55 |
That was very amusing, I enjoyed it very much. Keep writing about France, I love it. I have only had the pleasure of visiting once but you bring me back every time. ![]() |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Larzana.. thanks so much for your lovely comments.. usually I am very friendly and open, but I tell you today, Madame, put me out of sorts, so I didn't make conversation at all! my loss I know, I will try harder next time ![]() Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, you put a picture and movie in my mind with this one and I laughed, I enjoy your little adventure in Paris and that you are writing again. Take care my friend. Rick |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear RDB, This is a very amusing poem. That's the way it most everywhere. Love Bobby |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ah, darling, maybe she thought that the sun was being unfaithful to her. Or that he prefered the lovliness of ... you! xoxoox Ali |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
Roniece never give up your spot in the sun.. even to a french woman ![]() still enjoying your views shellie |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Roniece, well at least you learned one thing from that encounter, never give up your place in the sun. Love Lindsay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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