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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
silk and nectar merge cathedral window winging a wash of sun |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Klassy One, it is always a treat when I see that you have posted a poem! This delicate penning is divinely sublime ~ and sublimely Divine...  In my mind's eye I can see the sun filtering through the colourful wings of a newly freed butterfly ~ as if the wings were stained glass windows in a church. Exquisite, Karen! ~ Just like you! Love you dear poetess and friend! Linda  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
 Thank you! Such lovely warmth beats the heart beneath your wings, my sweet angel friend. Hope your book is progressing beautifully! Love, Karen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful visual! A whole program packed in just three lines. Love, Margherita  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Margherita, thank you for sharing. It's an attempt at haiku. I know it's not traditional, though, because man-made images are usually omitted from the traditional forms. I appreciate the encouragement very much!Karen |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
VERY nicely done, Lassy! (missing a syllable in the last line for it to be a haiku but...so what??  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Klassy Lassy - very meaningful with few words. Nice write... BC |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I love this write. Butterflies are some of the most amazing creatures in existence. Thank you for this. Arana Darkwolf |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
What a beautiful image! |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
beautiful, klassy I was lookin for you shel |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Michael, love those exacting eyes! I missed some replies on this poem. Winging soft colors your way, these vibrant mini sails across Indian summer. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Bill, thank you sharing your thoughts. You are so good with winging color and softness in your poetry. I missed the replies on this one and would not have known if I'd not gone back into the archives today. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Shel, you are a sweetie! Thank you. Have missed you lately.... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Rachael, they are extraordinary creatures, aren't they? How they capture so much magic in their wings is a momentous wonder, and the sun grows jealous! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Alwye, Thank you for the light in your eye. Thank you.  |
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