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Suncleaver
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0 posted 2009-09-24 08:40 AM



O head that pounds a hammers wrath,
A resonating boom,
I tripped along the forecourt path
And couldn't find my room.

O bloody hell, this ain't my block,
And who's this naked girl?
My wallet's gone, I've lost a sock,
The memories unfurl.

No condom down the toilet pan,
I may be called a cynic,
So dressed as quickly as I can,
I'd better hit the clinic.


'Wailing voices on the wind, urging me to turn. Distant tortured screams. Cold blue fires burn'.

© Copyright 2009 Luke Doubtfire - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-09-24 08:48 AM


Oh, my gawd! lol Perhaps you best keep your pants on and your head on straight! School days, school days, remember the golden rule days! ~ Don't pay me any mind! I'm just in one of my giddy, goofy moods!

You cracked me up with this one, Luke the Duke!

Good luck tomorrow!

Loveya!
Linda  

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2 posted 2009-09-25 02:10 AM


Yep, I agree with Linda - and I am laughing.  Maybe that's where your sock went.

Maybe?



A

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3 posted 2009-09-28 02:10 PM


ROFL... there are morning's after... and there are morning's laughter... you've given both! *S*
LindsayP
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4 posted 2009-09-28 10:23 PM



Ditto to all those comments Suncleaver

You gave us all a laugh. Don't be late for school.

Lindsay

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