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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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I lay here in the green grass six o’clock sun Brooks & Dunn in my ears my brown eyes shut and I remember a time when I loved you with such force it literally did break my heart . |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I remember such a time, Shellie and spend many days listening to those tunes that leave me with feelings of a happier time.  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Music is an incredibly powerful conductor for memories. Beautiful, Shellie, enjoyed the serenity of your moment! Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My deas sweet ss, this aches ~ but not in a depressing way. It is as though you're feeling the pain from a distance and that you acknowledge it but have come to terms with it. "when I loved you with such force it literally did break my heart" ~ Nodding with understanding... P.S. I like Brookes and Dunn, as well!  Love you, girlfriend, Linda  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes..the love that lingers at the edge of heartbreak is the storm before the calm |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I can truly relate to how you feel. I have had the very same feeling. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks so much he has a lot to prove on this second go-round |
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