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The Deed |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
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The Deed Gridlocked into the moment, pursuing the wants of my needs I came upon a lonely soul and asked him to do the deed. He looked at me with staring eyes, and I could feel the coldness within I have come here to ask you a question! "I said And he motioned for me to come in. Do you have what I asked for? said the man with that look in his eyes yes i managed to get some and he grabbed the package in surprise. I asked if he still had what I came for, he said yes it's in the next room wait here and i will get it for you Off he went with a look of doom. He emerged out of the kitchen, a little puppy in his hand yes that's him he is adorable lets go before he changes is mind. Annie 23-9-2009  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Mysterious story, but I am glad that the puppy changed home, as you say there was coldness in there. Nice write, dear Annie. Love, Margherita |
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anniepimm54 Member
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Thank you Margherita  |
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