Open Poetry #45 |
Today you find me... |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Today you find me In the Jardins des Plantes Sitting on a bench in the sun It is peaceful and calm Away from tourists And the like In the distance Le Pompiers Still scream their Parr-dons Along Rue Monge But here inside this sanctuary There is a quietness Just me and the sun gods The humming of the bees And the flowers and the trees and it’s here I give thanks for my day... Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
This sounds just perfect the type of place i love, Thank you for sharing your thoughts But here inside this sanctuary There is a quietness Just me and the sun gods The humming of the bees And the flowers and the trees and it’s here I give thanks for my day... Annie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, it is a pleasure to watch you smile there |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Roneice, Paris is bringing out the best in you. I totally adore this! Thank you for this meditative moment. I am saving it and will return to it often, to be sure. Awwww, the pause that refreshes. Lindy Lou |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, sounds like you have had yet another wonderful day in Paris, the sun Gods love you for sure. A very nice write my friend, very much enjoyed. Rick |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You really know how to enjoy your moments and you even don't forget to express your gratitude. Wonderful, dear Roniece. (so the bees would make me a little bit anxious, but thanks God also for them!!) Bisous de Rome. Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
another absolutely grand-fine slice of Parisian Impressionism! MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning' !! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Roniece my dear, you are making me feel envious but I'm sure that you are only getting what you deserve. much enjoyed. Love and a big hug. Lindsay |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a lovely, peaceful poem, Roniece. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Sounds like a very nice place to be, Roniece. Mind if I join you? |
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