Open Poetry #45 |
Sweetheart |
martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
sweetheart sweetheart I love you love you but your name escapes me your face escapes me do you do you exist exist is it all just a dream just a dream a wish a wish a kiss a kiss do you will you who you where you ever love me, too |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
It's like an echo in a dream unusual style there, well penned |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
wow, an echo, something I never thought of, and that's EXACTLY what it is, a voice alone echoing off the walls |
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