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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-09-21 06:06 AM



sweetheart
sweetheart

I love you
love you

but your name escapes me
your face escapes me

do you
do you exist
exist

is it all just a dream
just a dream
a wish
a wish
a kiss
a kiss

do you
will you
who you
where you
ever love me,
too

© Copyright 2009 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 110

1 posted 2009-09-21 06:15 AM


It's like an echo in a dream unusual style there, well penned
martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
2 posted 2009-09-21 10:22 AM


wow, an echo, something I never thought of, and that's EXACTLY what it is, a voice alone echoing off the walls
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