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Autumn Evening Wind |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Autumn Evening Wind Beyond these dark, indifferent windows, beneath a faint-disk moon rising, the algid Autumn evening wind (never lingering long) scatters wisps of clouds, leaves and memories across these ancient hills. On this dagger-edge of Winter, love and life are hollow echoes resounding from a broken heart to an empty sky. --- b. e. adams (9/19/2009) |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
That's lovely you can almost hear the harsh wind blowing thank you for sharing your thoughts with us..  Well penned |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"On this dagger-edge of winter" Love this. Another very fine poem, Bruce. I think I have saved more of yours than I have my own. Ida |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I also loved "on the dagger-edge of winter." Perfect description. Much enjoyed! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is my favorite of yours!   ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are the master of melancholic poetry, dear Bruce. No doubt many a heart can relate to this feeling, beautifully expressed. Love and warmth. Margherita  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Up to the top....with this sad, lonely, beautiful write... ~ARH |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
On this dagger-edge of Winter, love and life are hollow echoes resounding from a broken heart to an empty sky. So sad but beautifully written! Helen |
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