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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30
Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2009-09-20 11:46 PM


I'm encased in my mind.

The black inkiness
of my conscience
bursts to life
with music...
that I can SEE!

The weaving melodies
engulf me.
My head reverberates
with the beats,
the rhythms,
the tempos,
the heart
of all the music
ever created.

I'm like
Alice in Wonderland;
a kid in a candy store.

I'm drinking in the
beautiful sounds.
I'm not playing the music.
It's playing me.

Melodies the colors of the rainbow
surround me;
they clothe me
in a beautiful gown of
artistry
from the heart.

Because music says
all the things
that words
can't say;
shows the things
that eyes can't see;
lets you feel the things
that hands can't touch.

The music starts
and I am lost.
I'm falling
into the depths
of my
audiocentric paradise.

[This message has been edited by UNTAMEDelegance (09-21-2009 12:16 AM).]

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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
1 posted 2009-09-21 01:05 AM


Beautifully captured

-LostPoet

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