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The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
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EL, Michigan

0 posted 2009-09-20 07:35 PM


Words unspoken
glances exchanged
You and me-
at a bend in the road
Perhaps it's my turn
to take control of the wheel-

Wretched  
away from you

Off your treaded road-
kicking up dirt in the countryside

Paving my road
Cultivating myself anew

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-21 05:31 AM


Sounds great, dear Jill! Always a treat to read you!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-09-21 01:43 PM


Hi, Jill! So that is what you have been doing while you've been away! ~ Time well spent, it would appear! lol


Linda

The Shadow in Blue
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3 posted 2009-09-21 07:17 PM


I've never realized how hard it is to realize (sorry for the redundancy) that I don't need to follow the set course. And for that matter settle for friends who aren't really that wonderful.

I guess I am trying to say that I am trying to find my way generally (almost as much as I am academically)

That's life for you.

Thanks for the replies chicas.

Jillian Slamka

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