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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2009-10-31 03:52 PM


I fall easy
from my heartache
all my my passion
runs away from me,
its a world of lust
that makes it easy
turns the darkness
into rays of light.
The soul tears apart
for the last time
while the silence builds
and the angels cry,
for the permanent scratch
upon the mind
as you watch your life
build into nothing.
I fall easy
for my minds sake
as I walk this earth
looking for the start,
it was in my hands
close to comfort
but chance took over
and blew it apart.

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-10-31 04:32 PM


well that is very sad, Michael~~

and I do believe lust without loving gets you nothing in return

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-10-31 04:52 PM


You meant "riddance"? This is very sad yes, well rendered state of frustration.

Every new day gives us the opportunity to start again ...

Love,
Margherita

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
3 posted 2009-10-31 08:26 PM


The soul tears apart
for the last time
while the silence builds
and the angels cry

I Know This All Too Well. Sad, But Beautiful.

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

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