Open Poetry #45 |
Dancing in the Wind |
anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Dancing in the wind I am here my love, I still walk with you, the sadness in your eyes still shows. be at peace my love, I still live! here in the heart of you in your memories, in your smile and in your every breath I am alive. The wind carries my love to you, the rain is me, kissing your cheeks. the leaves rustling on the trees is my voice, telling you I am here forever I will not leave. Come! dance with me one last time, let me hold you for the time- that I spend in your thoughts. feel your feet lighter than air, and let your mind drift to the physical love we once shared. Let your mind allow your lips to smile once more, at the thought of me here in your arms. no more tears before bedtime, no more lonely times spent in decay smile and be happy and start a brand new day. Annie 20-09-2009 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Annie, your most recent offerings, this one included, are truly precious gifts. Very, very beautiful. Romantic and soothing. Love, Margherita |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Hi Thank you Margherita I am attempting to use a new style of writing I am glad there working.. Annie |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dancing in the wind I am here my love, I still walk with you, the sadness in your eyes still shows. be at peace my love, “I still live! here in the heart of you in your memories, in your smile and in your every breath I am alive“. The wind carries my love to you, the rain is me, kissing your cheeks. the leaves rustling on the trees is my voice, telling you I am here forever I will not leave. Come! dance with me one last time, let me hold you for the time- that I spend in your thoughts. feel your feet lighter than air, and let your mind drift to the physical love we once shared. Let your mind allow your lips to smile once more, at the thought of me here in your arms. no more tears before bedtime, no more lonely times spent in decay smile and be happy and start a brand new day. Oh Annie... this is truly so beautiful.. every line I can relate to... Bless you for your talent, bless you my lovely friend Bisous de Paris RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Aww Thank you Roniece, i am so glad you can take a piece of it with you and hold it to give you sunshine.. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
this is beautiful |
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larzana Member
since 2009-09-17
Posts 55 |
All I have to say has already been said but I cannot resist reiterating...beautiful! |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Awwww thank you my friends that so nice of you.. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Annie ~you read my mind with this one... A beautiful love story~ ~ARH |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Aww Thank you ARH, I was just thinking of my Daughter when i wrote this, and the fact her husband has been gone now for four years.. |
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