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Open Poetry #45

Words In A Love Song

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-06-18 03:30 AM

Words In A Love Song

Enticed by the pleasure
It had been my choice
He had me captivated
In the sound of his voice

Whilst playing his guitar
Alongside him I knelt
As I sway to the beat
The love and desire I felt

Words soothing my soul
Loving eyes I convey
Embracing every note
His fingers skillfully play

As I leant closer he said
This was meant to be
Words in a love song
Were written just for me

Hope ©2009

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

1 posted 2009-06-18 08:23 AM

Ohh Wow that is so Beautiful
This first stanza is my fave
.........................
Enticed by the pleasure
It had been my choice
He had me captivated
In the sound of his voice
.......................
Thank you for sharing this

Annie

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-06-18 09:52 AM

Dear Hope, how absolutely beautiful! I so love it when you write the sunny side of love.

Love,
Margherita

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

3 posted 2009-06-18 04:36 PM

HopeS - This was enchanting and drew me in. I feel better now. Thanks for the Hope, HopeS. Namyh

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

4 posted 2009-06-18 06:20 PM

~hope...one of the best feelings in the world is having words written just for you! enjoy that memory : )

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2009-06-18 09:25 PM

Hmmmmm, that's a nice love song, Hope~

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2009-06-18 09:34 PM

Yo dear HopeS,

This is very good work. I like it a lot.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2009-06-18 09:45 PM

HopeS - a song written for one shows true feelings, nice write...

BC

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

8 posted 2009-06-18 09:52 PM

A very sweet love poem dear Hope in your

usual sweet style. enjoyed.

Lindsay

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