Open Poetry #45 |
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You Are Wonderful. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. ![]() |
You are an exclamation point. An excuse to roll up my sleeves, and try. You are water in my glass. Crystal clear, absolutely necessary for my survival. You are wonderful. A perfect flower, producing obscene amounts of oxygen. ____________________________________ I Do Everything Out of Order, Ellen. -P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~work hard, quench your thirst, breathe deeply, paulie...you are wonderful, too...thank you |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks, brown eyes. -P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is such a lovely declaration of love, dear Paul! The fresh air, the transparency of this feeling, is perceived. Inhale deeply and be overwhelmed. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You are water in my glass. Crystal clear, absolutely necessary for my survival." loved that.... you rock Paul! ![]() |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Paul, Yes, I agree that I'm all of those things. Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Margo... Thank you, ma'am. I'm glad you liked it! It's good to hear that my message was conveyed correctly. My dear, beautiful SEA... Thank you mademoiselle. And no, YOU rock. Robbus, my main man... You are, sir. You certainly are. Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Paul, I really do love this. It's like a catch in the throat because the feeling is overwhelming. Wonderful. You are wonderful. Alison |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thank you Alahoon. -P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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