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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-09-15 08:48 AM



I stand and watch the starlings as they gather
And I look at the meadow for  a clue
I look up at the vastness of the galaxies
For I’ve been looking everywhere for you

I can hear the rustling leaves of autumn
And the spring fed waters as they fall
I’ve been listening well to the warbler’s lovely song
But I can’t hear  a sound from you at all

Then I wonder if you are even present
Do  you see the sorrow on my face
Can you hear my prayers, if you aren’t even there
Perhaps I’ll choose a different time and place

Then the starlings flew into the heavens
And the field was quite a sight to see
A million little stars are spelling out the words
Turn around and please come unto me

Oh I could never lift my face toward heaven
I can never let him see my tears
How could my heart consider any of those doubts
When the Lord has been with me through the years

Oh Lord forgive me for asking you these questions
The simple answer was with me all along
You ARE the stars, and the wind and the earth
And are the most exquisite song

Elizabeth Santos

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-15 11:42 AM


Deep pain can sometimes make us feel abandoned, but then suddenly there comes this wonderful awareness of being wrapped in divine love always. You express this so beautifully, with your usual mastery.

Poignant gift for dear Joyce.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-09-15 11:52 AM


Liz, you have a tremendously kind and compassionate heart and the talent to express it eloquently and with such tenderness.

God bless you, dear poetess, and our precious Joyce.


Linda

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2009-09-15 12:18 PM


Joyce possesses the deep abidng faith that I strive for and would never have these some doubts, but sometimes it helps to be reminded that we are not alone in our sorrow. As for Joyce, she knows the Lord is with  her every moment, but in addition she has a whole family of poets whose prayers are being heard.
I was so touched by her poem
LOve you, Joyce
Liz

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2009-09-15 03:50 PM


Joyce is a special part of Pip! ~ We all care for you and hoping that all is fine.

to you Joyce
ARCTIC WIND

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
5 posted 2009-09-15 05:30 PM


Ms. Santos
   You are still the most wonderful poet around. I still have the poem you wrote about me and still just gives me chills. You have always been one of my favorites and you still amaze me with your intelligence and your craft of poetry.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2009-09-15 06:06 PM


beautifully expressed~~

M

Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2009-09-15 07:31 PM


Dear Elizabeth, I am so amazed that you use your talent to write for me.  I am pleased and touched and I do get my peace from Him.  I know our Jesse is with Him and we will all see him again.  His mother tells me she is jealous because I will see him first.
Thanks to all of you who have paused to think of us in our pain and to remember us in your prayers.  I have found so much love in these pages.  Love, Joyce  

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA
8 posted 2009-09-15 11:38 PM


Elizabeth, one again you have penned the most beautiful poem. And, for a very special lady.
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