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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I always wanted you to pick those special parts that made the woman of you have that shivering skin and run with me to our roof eye view of lonely where we watched cocoa men make their lolly pops we played in their wax then with out our gloves on smearing it around like glue on our freckles then pulling it off quickly to see if they came too but they never did so we just took time to name them and then there were those fences we used to climb you said the skirts were easier than the jeans not for the climbing but for when we got there and you knew I didn't mind offering my hand but it was my eyes that made you crazy most often _____________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"I always wanted you to pick those special parts that made the woman of you have that shivering skin and run with me to our roof eye view of lonely where we watched cocoa men make their lolly pops" Nothing like a lolly pop to make a gal smile D. Well nothing that is, other than your poetry.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs..thank you donna...we all have our candy store/factory favorite places it seems. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
but it was my eyes that made you crazy most often so true, so true.. lovely offering Mr Daark.. Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b..thanks lady friend!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Always enjoy the style of your words, my friend. j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Those eyes must have some power! Just like your words, that always captivate with such force! You bring emotions even with dark sunglasses on. Love it. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Jwes..thanks amigo _____________ ms mar, thank you lady friend |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
but it was my eyes that made you crazy most often I totally understand. *G* I'm an "eyes" gal, myself. *G* Loved this!!! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suthern your eyes always smile me. Thanks lady friend |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
some days she longed to impale herself on fence dreams, melting in his sun. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi.. rincon still is such a lovely fence and I imagine she would love the trees too, thanks babe!! |
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