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WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

0 posted 2009-08-06 04:51 PM

Morning Love

Wanderlust and whispers,
Misty morning dew,
Dreaming through the sun rise,
Lying next to you,

Bright the beaming rays,
Broken by the towering pine,
Warms the heart and stirs the soul,
Like sweet red cherry wine,

Sensual feelings touch our senses,
As the fresh morning breezes blow,
Holding you body close to mine,
I never want to let you go,

Then you look in to my eyes,
And that smile comes to your face,
I pull you closer and taste you lips,
You take me in your embrace,

As we loose ourselves in passion,
And revel in this amorous bliss,
At the end of something hot and wild,
We seal our morning love with a kiss.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

[This message has been edited by WTBAKELAR (08-06-2009 11:14 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2009-08-06 05:19 PM

I especially like the slant of sun that appears in my minds eye.
The love is pretty heady, and your entire poem is devine.

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

2 posted 2009-08-06 05:30 PM

Thanks, Blue, I am so glad you enjoyed it,
Mornings are some of my favorite, um, positions? Well, you know what I mean,

Love always,
Tracey.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2009-08-06 10:01 PM

Tracey my good friend that is a very sweet romantic poem, well written and most enjoyable. keep up the good work. take care

Lindsay

Billie Cullimore
Member

since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

4 posted 2009-08-16 12:53 PM

Hi!  Son.
Another beautiful poem.  I still say, "Lucky Shellie."  Bless you both.

Love  Mom

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

5 posted 2009-08-16 10:14 PM

This is absolutely beautiful, Tracey!

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

6 posted 2009-08-17 06:12 PM

wanderlust is exactly what you inspired

lovely Tracey
H

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

7 posted 2009-08-19 07:19 PM

Thank you all for your very kind comments on my poem. I don't have much time lately to come in and browse, Just drop in a poem every now and then, and hopefully get a chance to read some.

Nice to see you all, AND, Thank you all for your time and friendship. (oh yeh, and mom for,a,,, being MOM)

Love always,
Tracey.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2009-09-16 09:57 AM

Now THAT kind of morning would make waking up worthwhile! *S* Beautiful! *S*

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

9 posted 2009-09-16 10:03 AM

Ruth, What better way to start your day, Oh, and any guy would be the lucky one to start their day waking up with you.

Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Love always,
Tracey.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

10 posted 2009-09-16 11:57 PM

what a way to wake up

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

11 posted 2009-09-17 09:25 AM

Hey Shelley, Beats the heck out of coffee, of course, most times you just want to go back to sleep after.

Thanks for stopping in and commenting on my morning Love.

Always,
Tracey

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