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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-09-15 03:57 AM



She has to be Queen,
the center of attention,
everyone bow to her,
make sure she is noticed,

I, the fair maid,
bow to no one,
my words are for few,
the ones deserved,

Prentenders come and go,
dime a dozen in this land,
she likes control, number one,
she desires the kings place,

Pages of blue are her throne,
no real love, or life to her own,
no life but to sit and be on the computer,
all day, everyday, every hour, minute,

what a waste of life and time,
I must go, I have some hunting to do,
the day is long, time is short,
never believe what your eyes don't see,

what you hear is not always true,
I may see her different than you,
away from these pages of blue,
The devil appears as an angel of light,

Sometimes what you see, may not be,
the truth, sometimes, just the opposite,
trust your heart, not vain whisperings,
tongues are swords, jabbing the heart,

I agree , she is not queen,
but we can allow her think so,
so don't pull the cord,
leave the matrix alone.



© Copyright 2009 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
GBride
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since 2009-07-02
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1 posted 2009-09-16 06:10 PM


Simply inspiring!!!
GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

2 posted 2009-09-17 07:28 PM


"For the devil can site scripture for his evil purpose.
An evil soul producing holy witness is like a villain with a smiling cheek.
Ah, what a goodly outside falsehood hath.
Looked the innocent flower
But the serpent t'under." Bill Shakespear.
This is a fabulous poem and it deserves more than one comment.
By the way, I think I was married to this woman once.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2009-09-17 07:33 PM


G~you have me laughing and crying at the same time lol,

yes you see my insight perfectly, thank you for understanding~

~ARH

Inspired-8
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Pluto
4 posted 2009-09-19 12:06 PM


Awesom write my friend bravo! Gbride if you divorced her i think i married her!

cheers
inspired8

larzana
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since 2009-09-17
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5 posted 2009-09-19 12:11 PM


I loved how you ended it.
so don't pull the cord
leave the matrix alone.
It feels ominous.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2009-09-19 01:04 PM


In the world, there is always a Queen.


ARCTIC WIND

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