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Open Poetry #45

little eyes

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2009-09-14 06:11 PM

She sat with her father on the bench.
her brown, danish hair
leaning over her eyes,
As her legs continuously swung off the park bench.

He was reading her the story of Egypt.
his gray, brownish hair besieged
between their two faces,
his slightly curled nose, curved like hers
and they sat with an infinite calmness.

Each sentence read,
she opened her mouth a bit wider,
a bit softer,
as the pigeons chased for food,
she listened intently, unguarded,
her eyes modeling the blue backs of each pigeon around them.

They sat,
sat so closely,
as if their lives were shaded onto an empty page
of a crisp innocence
of a father with her daughter,
little eyes that followed.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

1 posted 2009-09-14 09:56 PM

They sat,
sat so closely,
as if their lives were shaded onto an empty page
of a crisp innocence
of a father with her daughter,
little eyes that followed.
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I enjoyed your 'little eyes' here..

sweet moment captured..

GBride
Senior Member

since 2009-07-02

Posts 538

2 posted 2009-09-16 06:06 PM

Simply inspiring!!!

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2009-09-18 04:21 PM

Thanks for the kind words,

Adios

Tomer

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