Divers . . . ( For Bill M and John C)

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Open Poetry #45

Divers . . . ( For Bill M and John C)

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-09-14 11:20 AM

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Everyone else
Is asleep

The weekend
For late night maneuvers
Or movies the mornings
Lost in bed

Out of context
With the time
Three men
Load up their cars

That cough
Like camels being stirred

The dawn
Sung in by doves

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2009-09-14 11:21 AM

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Calm Seas
Fair Winds
Old Friends

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-09-14 11:25 AM

So vivid and so promising. Dawn rendered with such charm. Beautiful, John!

Love
M

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-09-14 08:39 PM

calm seas

fair winds

sad..

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2009-09-14 08:45 PM

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Thank you both

I did the math
They're gone

They were my friends

Thanks again

John

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2009-09-14 08:54 PM

Poignant, heartfelt.
So sorry about your loss.

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