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abhursty
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since 2009-02-25
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0 posted 2009-09-12 07:04 PM



I dont know why I wrote this. All I know is it's a silly poem about clouds.

Clouds
The clouds the clouds oh up so high.
The clouds the clouds up in the sky.
Oh how I wish I could fly,
So I could be up in the sky.

© Copyright 2009 Abigail Hurst - All Rights Reserved
anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 110

1 posted 2009-09-14 08:04 AM


Short and sweet, nothing wrong with that
It is more of a Haiku type poem
you could sit and try to expand it i suppose
but if not it's OK as it is
Annie


abhursty
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since 2009-02-25
Posts 45

2 posted 2009-09-15 08:33 PM


Lol if I try to fix it it'll just get messed up. I cant write anything when I try, it just happens.
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