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abhursty
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since 2009-02-25
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0 posted 2009-09-12 03:58 PM



Love
Love is a feeling of true delight.
It comes and it goes but it's always in sight.
It can be a dozen hair pins,
Or written on bear skins.
Love yourself body and soul,
Or you will turn into a ghoul.


And thats as far as I got. The reason i wrote this was because in a book i read it said love yourself and this appeared a few moments later on my skirt.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-13 09:05 AM


Yes, it's always in sight. Bear skin could be a risky business, better bare skin I suggest

That little demon is a scary vision, better not giving him any reasons to show up, by loving ourselves, thus caring for ourselves ...

Good one!

Love,
M

anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 110

2 posted 2009-09-13 09:28 AM


I liked this poem i enjoyed reading it
Thanks for sharing
Annie

abhursty
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since 2009-02-25
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3 posted 2009-09-15 08:31 PM


Tys peoples. ^.^
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