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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Peach colored clouds swept across the sky like a veil of chiffon, soft and beautiful in their sheerness I felt your presence. A twinkling of stars lit up my eyes the shadow of your smile billowed my heart each beat welled with tears that fell on the sandy shoreline. A loon cries in the distance echoes of the past skim the surface. Like the rise and fall of tides are ever present wading through cherished memories hold us close in a warm embrace. The quiet whisper of wind serves as your shoulder I lean on reminding me that love runs deep and never dies it remains timeless and true. Like the sweep of clouds and twinkling stars I feel you everywhere. In the warm rays of sun and the glow of moon beams. Your spirit is eternal as the sunsetting sky. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine, emotive 'write' with grand imagery! I am especially fond of: "A loon cries in the distance echoes of the past skim the surface." MUCH applause for this 'penning' !! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like your sea song yes true love will remain in the background surfacing in pretty poems and memories |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
A twinkling of stars lit up my eyes the shadow of your smile billowed my heart each beat welled with tears that fell on the sandy shoreline. ____________________ your writing is always graceful, blues.. lovely  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dreampoet~ It's always great to see your name under my poetry. Thank you for your nice reply Good Goddess~ I so appreciate you singing the blues with me. Thanks so much. Hey girly, girl~ I'm truly flattered by your comments, you encourage me to keep on keepin' on, and I thank you kindly. Hugs you~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Awe inspiring, dear Lori! I am always happy when I see you posting. You write most beautifully, dear Poetess. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy, you have a way of making windows in the sand...enjoyed you here |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Well what can I say when reading such beautiful words ? Breathtakingly gorgeous to captivate anybody. A true delight to read. Heart2Heart |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I know there's a period in the middle of these, but these lines were my favorite... "echoes of the past skim the surface. Like the rise and fall of tides" Mucho ejoyed walking with you, my friend. jwesley |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Margherita~ You are ever so kind to me, thank you. DS~~ That's a neat concept, windows in the sand!! Thanks... Makes me happy to see you here. Heart2Heart~ Thank you so much for your gracious reply. I appreciate it very much. jwesley~ Now I'm wondering if I put that period in the right place!! Hmmmm!! Either way I thank you for stopping by and leaving a little something for me. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
The quiet whisper of wind serves as your shoulder I lean on reminding me that love runs deep and never dies it remains timeless and true. A beautiful post you have written my dear and a delight to read. love. Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lovely Lori, your serenade is of a tranquil pale blue... ~ Truly an enjoyable read and one with which I identified.   Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bluesy - you do write a bluesy poem, and I like it. Very deep as one reads it into ones depths... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A few people impress me with their romantic poetry, Blues, you are one of them. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lindsay~ What a nice surprise to see you here. Thanks so much for the nice reply! Linda~ A tranquil pale blue? Now there's a poem in the making for sure. You are such a sweet angel and I thank you. BC~ I'm so glad you like my bluesy poems, you're always so kind to me. Thank you. Ms. Madness~ Thank you for paying me such a nice compliment, I really appreciate you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bluesy sweetie, it does my heart good to read your words again. This m'dear is poetically polished perfection. No one writes these scenes and longing, quite the way that you do hon. So glad I stopped by today. Hugs ~D |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
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terasinas Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 91Michigan ... The Great Lakes |
Lovely impressions of love and loss, I am sure many of us identify with. This reminded me of a poem I once wrote ... I feel the love dear ((hugs)) ~tera Man was born free, and he is everywhere in chains." - Jaque Rouseau |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bluesy - wonder what lives in your softness of a heart, as you write these touching lines... BC |
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