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Amazing grace (haiku)
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Amazing grace (haiku) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Amazing grace scene: swans glide upon smooth waters demonstrating peace. *** |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
well done ! amazing grace indeed ... (fine choice of photo-imagery as well) serious applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...very cool stuff!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An amazinly gracious write and photo. I'm breathing in the serenity! Thanks, Dolphina! As you well know, I needed that!  Linda AT |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Beautiful and timely~ Love your haikus, Margherita~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
You've captured a moment of bliss for sure |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, my dear Poet friends. I enjoyed your replies. This scene at the lake really brought me deep serenity. Love, Margherita  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
lessons from nature.. this made me think on many levels lovely 'rita  |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
All of life is a metaphor, and in this haiku, I think what you have done is combine haiku with metaphor so beautifully. Huggs Jan |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
No one writes "lovely" as well as you. xoxoxo Alison |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - lovely and peaceful for sure... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Swans are so beautiful and "amazingly graceful." You have an eye for beauty and the skill to share it with others, Margherita. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, to be like a swan! I am sometimes and then ... life happens. Amazing grace - yes, indeed. Hugs Helen |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
bravo Margherita, I love haikus and this one is meaningful and sweet and descriptive, a very talented write... have great day. yann |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
This one radiates serenity, just beautiful Margherita Katriona |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So nice to read your warm replies, my dear Poet friends. Thank you all! Love, Margherita |
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