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Nan
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0 posted 2009-09-11 09:02 AM



A
Godly Sun
Stepped soundlessly
Upon an eastern tide
In mantled tendrils
Risen from serene repose
Bemusing warmth in
Waning summer's
Cloudless dawning sky

A
Godly Sun
Thence met befraught
Entreating lamp of gold
Held stalwartly upon
The shores of Lady Liberty
Lest Freedom's reign be clouded
By an ashen flood of steel
Upon a dark eleventh mourn

A
Godly Sun
Yet shone on high
Above duplistic billow's dark
Defilement of Freedom's day
Mere underworld intent
To undermine our sanctity
and thwart the provident
Ascension of a Worldly Peace

A
Godly Sun
With opened hands
In healing prayer forsooth
Enjoined a Great Divide
O'er skies American United
In our Freedom's song
To harmonize Amazing Grace
Upon the mourning sky

A
Godly Sun
Spread rays of love
To every continent
With shining fingers far outstretched
To touch each saddened heart with light
And lift the shadows of mistrust
Embracing all on earth as one
Enlightened by a darkened day

A
Godly Sun
Holds mankind's fate
Enclenched within in its palm
American Stripes proudly wave
In worldwide gratitude
And dedicate as kindred stars
Now Heaven's Angels holding high
Their beacons at each shore

For One Humanity
God Bless Us One And All


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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 2009-09-11 09:20 AM


THIS is why you shoud be writing, dear friend.
You raise the bar too high, and yet it is a star to reach for
You are the best
Liz

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-09-11 09:39 AM


Wonderful write, dear Nan.

Your choice of words is amazingly appropriate. It's an embrace for humanity in a moment of deepest sorrow.

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2009-09-11 09:56 AM


Nan - I knew there was a Nan somewhere, Hi Nan...

God bless one and all, and God bless you... Thank you for those prayers when I needed them, for they worked...

BC

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4 posted 2009-09-11 01:21 PM


See what Liz wrote, then you will figure out why I shop instead now.   This should be sent somewhere for more to see Nan.  This is a sad day of remembrance.
icebox
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5 posted 2009-09-11 01:31 PM


Well done!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2009-09-11 03:24 PM


God bless us one and all..

Nan.. you have a beautiful gift.. thank you for sharing this with us again..

Bisous du Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Oklahoma Rose
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7 posted 2009-09-11 05:30 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Nan. I have missed you.
Heart2Heart
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Scotland/Norway
8 posted 2009-09-13 03:09 PM


Quite one of the most beautiful poems I have read here.
Katriona

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Realms of Light
9 posted 2009-09-13 10:24 PM


Nan, you are one fine poetess and it would be lovely to be able to read more of your poetry!
You are such a little tease. You treat us ~ then you retreat!

I felt this one in my throat! ~ I was literally getting choked up!

Love, Light, & Liberty,
Linda

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