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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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revitalization was it vision of some great potential? perhaps from the mind of God? we were simultaneously integral oh, lord, your eccentric manner~ impinged upon by bittersweet textures proportions balance a wholeness connection sweeping across wide ranging spiritual eyes presenting multiple meanings unintentionally fusing & reconfiguring individuality from the empty place of sighs possibilities within a broad sky of design full blown & mysterious coloring thoughts interpretation of generations from those cold spells in july like a miles davis song avoiding the ghosts of loose ends & snare drums we gazed upon trees patterns of shadows living within time understanding they're mode of thought that only comes from the interplay of summer nights waning to be seen to be held, to be loved miraculously encompassing great insight like a Hemmingway dream extensive spiritual & psychological awareness came interest….meaning tenderly blessing pearlescent spheres of dried skin hovering betwixt sea & air there lives desire casting spells a beggar of flaming peaks elation of thesis in final synthesis like an azure Caribbean sea spread out or' the world evolution bursting prose and diversity of currents still whispering against my skin spawning some blue scarf of recompense endorsing fire in the heart of these old green eyes? I will hold you in the nest of sun wrapping my legs in a lovelorn embrace around the utterance of eternal devotion of ocean's fathoms & the resonance of your voice |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW!!! You amaze me constantly with imagery and layered analogies that are...pure POETRY. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Oh, this ... and this: quote: Spellbinding poetic beauty! You are TALL! Love and joy. Margherita  |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Amazing as always (((LeeJ))) Have missed you much |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting ‘write’ !! I am especially fond of: “those cold spells in july like a miles davis song avoiding the ghosts of loose ends & snare drums” ... wow … someone actually familiar with Miles Davis! and: “we gazed upon trees patterns of shadows living within time understanding they're mode of thought that only comes from the interplay of summer nights” |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear LeeJ, This is good stream of consciousness poetry. Love Bobby |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh dear Lady you shine so brightly, your poem is mesmerizing. You took my breath away you did!! This is absolutely stunning!!! ~sighing~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
LeeJ - I'm struck by your words, great write... BC |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
A colourful and vibrant free style write, so dreamy and romantic. A pleasure to read. heart2Heart |
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