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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
You are the sun. You are the moon. You are the happy tunes. My heart sings in June. You are the flower. That blooms in my heart after an april shower. You are the star that shines so bright. You are the love that makes my life so right. You are the wind that blows through my hair. Your love, like God, I feel everywhere. |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
God is everywhere She even blows through your hair For your life she has great care. You really are a poet!!! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
A love poem that compares your love interest in ways to God, is in my estimation a very high compliment paid. Your Love shold be impressed or moved by this simple yet substantial love message! I thank the LORD everyday |
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