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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
I'm a loser I'm a failure You laugh at me I'm a sinner I cry for you You dismiss my voice Even my peers Dismiss my voice I gave it my all Gave it a smile I was once a king Of such a powerful thing I could turn sand into castles They used to sing my praise Jesters dancing Maidens romancing Then it was all gone When you sang your song You laugh at my clothes As if I have a choice You tell me I'm a creep Such a creep So I took a leap Now you all love me Now I am heard You do not know My voice is slurred My vision is blurred I am such a fake Hidden behind a mask of lies Hidden within these eyes Please don't take My mask of darkness I hear the whispers I feel the hate You don't know This is my fate I smile at your disgust I laugh at your mistrust Give me a inch I'll take it all And shall I fall I shall fall With a smile I am a loser I am a failure You laugh at me I am a sinner "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
You are great, you are one of a kind, you are better than everyone else You are unique and refined and the only reason you said all those things about youreself is because you are special and reverend |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
I like your style. You win me over with a smile. Your up high at least a mile. Your honest, not a trace of guile. Damn your poems are good. |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Thank you both very much. |
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