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A Rondeau |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Where Once He Stood Where once he stood the grasses grow The leaves still rustle high and low Where once he walked the path still wends Through shades of green, round little bends The elm and poplar stately grow Yet silently as if they know The earth was silenced long ago Where once he stood A lofty tower does bestow The grandest view to land below He walks, he walks his plot again On wondrous trails that never end Where measured acres brightly glow With silver trees and golden snow Yet fox and sparrow seem to know Where once he stood |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Poignant and beautiful, dear Elizabeth. I also love how you point out the animals' sensitivity. Yes, they do know! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Bee-oooo-T-ful - here is what I saw Lizzie.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Liz. I love the 'nature-al' beauty that you have so graciously penned. "Yet fox and sparrow seem to know  Where once he stood"  Fantastic pic from the Mysterious One to complement your lovely poem!!! Love & Nature's Light, Linda   |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I'm loving this ~ Also, Mysteria, that was such a lovely picture. AWWWWW so cuteeeeee. to you bothARCTIC WIND |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
HOW DO YOU DO IT? Do you conjure up these phots in your head. Only you could come up with this one, angel TAHnk you Lizzie |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I loved the picture Liz and I loved the poem. great write. love Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I really love your poetry and it's a love that is growing day by day. xoxox Alison |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is a wonderful walk with Mother nature!! Nice~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Another beautiful and sensitive write from you, Elizabeth. Ida |
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