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Open Poetry #45

My Muse Has Returned

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-09-09 11:41 AM

I, forced to swallow the most bitter pill,
Of the never was, and the never will
Shimmering veil of darkest cloth hides eyes
Of my muse, once more she comes to descry
She sees into the deepest depths of me
Because without her, I am incomplete
With a rush like wind through the fertile field
And sunlight cascading in my mind unsealed
My loosed thoughts pour forth haltingly at first
She stands now before me, moistened lips pursed

Far across the field, this ardent meadow
I hear a thousand trumpets start to blow
I allow myself within her shadow
Letting who I was, and never will, go

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2009-09-09 11:50 AM

just beautiful! merci

Bisous du Paris
RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-09-09 12:14 PM

quote:
Far across the field, this ardent meadow
I hear a thousand trumpets start to blow

Love this and especially the quoted lines. Intense!

Love,
M

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-09-09 12:36 PM

Thank you ladies very much for your reading and comments.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-09-15 10:00 AM

The rhyme and rhythm are as perfect as I've come to expect from your work... but it's what your words make me feel that makes this one of my favorites.

Letting go, accepting what can't be no matter how much it's wanted... to show the pain but move forward with grace... this is incredibly beautiful!!

"Because without her, I am incomplete"

And without you, this forum would be, too. *S*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2009-09-15 03:46 PM

Always good to have Mrs Muse back and running.

ARCTIC WIND

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