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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-09-09 05:27 AM


Sometimes all we have to weigh
upon the scale of life
Is one small measured bit of hope
To comfort all the strife

Hope can follow on our path
No matter where we roam
Faith is father of our hope
An makes your heart its home

Faith would anchor all our hope
To deep and solid ground
Hope can still a quaking earth
But faith is more profound

Hope stays by an open window
Leaving us at will
Faith has no desire to leave
And perches on the sill

Elizabeth Santos


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ESHA SEN GUPTA
Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108
Maharashtra,India
1 posted 2009-09-09 06:48 AM


Dear Elizabeth ,

That you are a special and rare person can be understood by your poems.I love reading them and today you have touched a raw spot as I lost my best friend because I lost my faith in him .It is hurting ,anyway lovely poem.

Love Esha


Tim
Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

2 posted 2009-09-09 08:22 AM


A keeper, nicely done.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2009-09-09 12:16 PM


You spill serenity and instill hope and faith with your most beautiful words, dear Elizabeth.

Thank you for this! It is such a joy to read you more often!

Love,
Margherita

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
4 posted 2009-09-09 10:43 PM


Liz, you are and always have been such an inspiration to me. This is a great poem. I hang onto my hope, and have faith that some day my hopes will come true.
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2009-09-09 10:45 PM


A very wonderful message in this poem dear Liz.

Yes, having hope is a beautiful thing and to have Faith in what you believe in is amazing.

This was beautiful, thank you for this. I'm hoping everyone gets a little boost of Faith in this write.


ARCTIC WIND

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2009-09-10 12:20 PM


Good morning Elizabeth, and your most lovely poem...

BC

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