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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans

0 posted 2009-09-09 02:51 AM




I just looked into the night sky

Saw the starlights in your eye

Let me take you in my arms

No tricks no charms

I take you in my arms...

Take you in my arms

Give you anything you wished baby girl 'cause you are my world...

And if you

If you wished to die

I'd die for you

If you wished to cry

I'd cry for you

If you wished to fall

I'd fall for you...

Yes, I'd fall for you.

I'd fall for you

'cause baby girl you. Yes you, you got such a...

Such a lovely smile

Such a pretty laugh

Such a twinkling eye, should be painted

Such innocence, should never be tainted

By your touch, may you be sainted...

Awe, why do you turn away?

You know I got, more to say,

You know I got all day, and no place for my head to lay

Now I'm such a bore

You hate my voice

I laugh 'cause it was something you used to adore

Ha. Ha. Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha.

Ha. Ha. Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha.

Does he treat you well?

Make your heart swell?

Awe, why do you cry?

You already said bye

Now that's a lie

Come back? Why?

Go on back to your new, and better,

If you go back, I'm sure he'll let you, wear his sweater

I love how your cheeks turn red

and your brow wrinkles

when you lay on your bed

and cry, cry, cry the night away!

So lemme...

Lemme ask you a question.

Such a simple question.

Do you love me?

Then come and hug me.

Let me take you in my arms.

No tricks no charms.

Just you. In my arms.

© Copyright 2009 Zachariah Gavia-Peyton - All Rights Reserved
ESHA SEN GUPTA
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since 2009-09-01
Posts 108
Maharashtra,India
1 posted 2009-09-09 07:22 AM


This is exactly what many of us feel you expressed it very well.Just loved it.

Love Esha


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-09-09 12:25 PM


This has a great rhythm and I guess she will reward you if you sing it to her ...

Love,
M

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
3 posted 2009-09-10 03:59 PM


Thank you.
priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
4 posted 2009-10-05 05:25 PM


soulful
beautiful

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