Open Poetry #45 |
sky skirting |
brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
trusting the strength in your grip on the handle of things tethers me a kite on a string flying freely yet never so high I am lost nor ever without a way down back to your arms on the ground rewound . [This message has been edited by brneyedgrly (09-08-2009 06:20 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Shellie, I understand this and I love how you wrote about it! SAVED I'm so happy that you're back! I've been enjoying reading your fresh and new perspectives. You're another Molly (Brown) by golly! Loveya ss, Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely delightful, dear Shellie! Love and joy. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Browneyes It is a pleasure to see the woman of you dancing this way |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
linda but I changed it! I hope you will re-keep me thanks unsinkable sister _______________ thanks for those wishes, dear 'rita _______________ thanks ds |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Love the flow and rhythm of this, Shellie -Brad |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Oh, I love the flow as well. Very well done, and beautifully and poetically written. to you ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I really like this! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I absolutely adore your spirit and way with words. I like the idea of flying so high, yet staying within our means. Especially love your ending....Rewound!! yea, that's what I'm talking about!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - you sure do write some nice stuff. Liked this one a lot. You say a lot about your feelings in your writings, and they are touching... BC |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Beautifully captured. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"yet never so high I am lost nor ever without a way down" beautifully expressed, Shellie~~ M |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
you bomb, dawg. Paul I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Brown-eyed Beauty ~ Shellie, I just checked my library and it appears that it is the same as your rewrite. That's great news for me! ~ Because I'm the queen of rewrites! Now I know that when a pipster saves a poem of mine before I make any changes, they will automatically have the edited version! Yeah! Thanks, ss! Because of you, I just learned something new! Loveya! Linda |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"...your grip", "...tethers me", "...on a string", "rewound." Outstanding...!! jimmy. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thank you so much for reading and taking time to comment |
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